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Uppercut Sketch

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In a realm full of powerful spirits, Zoey has that one special attack skill that separates her from the rest~
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Canon
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Canon MG3500 series Network
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WHAM! I definitely love the energy and style in this drawing you did. It was clever when you chose to show the uppercut punch from the top perspective as he punches up against the monster's jaw. That way, the motion of the action is heading directly towards the viewer, and the energy and direction is shown in how the teeth fly. The foreshortening of the teeth as they fly out of the jaw is done really well and adds to the perspective of the drawing! There's not much to nitpick on perspective or style, so here are some suggestions on how you could make it better. Perhaps you could add some blood? I say this because I see that you have an eyeball flying out as well as with the teeth. Since you seem to be going for a lot of violence from that punch, have you ever considered putting in a little blood as well? Maybe it's a little too mature, but it's a suggestion. Another thing I think you can do is try drawing Zoey's fist in her uppercut. I understand the blur effect shows a little speed in her attack, but showing the fist may give the image more impact as it shows some barehanded contact with the baddie.

I hope you think these suggestions are nice and not... well, too eerie. I do enjoy your style of drawing and would like to see more of Zoey's escapades!